Paul Clews , Adrian Rymel and Craig branny are all signed for Berwick banditsSpeedway team in 2010
Posted: Saturday, November 28, 2009
by Stan Meath
Berwick bandits are a Premier League (PL) speedway team how race at Sheffield park in Berwick on Saturdays march until October. They are the regions best team and have enjoyed a lot of success this year. However, we see much need for improvement in the team. The biggest step to improving the team was signing Paul Clews, Adrian Rymel and Craig Branny. We will look at each individually.
Now lets get to Branny. Branny is a very well known person: those that read the local paper (Berwickshire News) will know all about him. He has ridden for Newcastle and Stoke now but is now at Berwick as number 7. He has had good and bad seasons at Berwick but is overall a very good rider.
Now finally we will look at Paul Clews. He has spent 3 years with Berwick and he started out as at number 6 he made his way up to number 3 Wow! Paul is the most entertaining rider there.
So hopefully this season will be even better than the last one and the team will enjoy even more success than they did last year.
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More commentsHi Stan. Thank you for sharing this to us. It would have been nice if you included a photo of the team. Thanks again. ~Nenita~
stan welcome aboard!Is it true that some people watch only just hoping to see a crash?
This article was good. Thanks for writing it.
Auto racing is not a subject that interests me greatly, but your article still made me want to read to the end. You clearly have a lot of interest in the sport and it comes through in your writing.There are a few technical errors scattered throughout the article that could do with being corrected.1) First sentence should probably start "The Berwick Bandits..." rather than just "Berwick Bandits..." and 'how' should probably be 'that'.2) Second paragraph, "...Adrian Rymel (is) a very (delete second very) good rider round Berwick (and) also..." (suggested corrections in brackets.)3) "He is a Czech(.) (M)any riders..."4) "Now let(')s get to..."5) "...Newcastle and Stoke (delete now) but is now..."6) "...and he started out as (remove at) number 6(.) (H)e made his way up to number 3(.) Wow!"A bit of polish will turn this into a top notch article.Good suggestion. and yes of course a bit polish will definitely turn your writing into a top notch writing.
Welcome to SearchWarp. You have written a very interesting article.Tehmina
I'm a little unsure of what you're writing about and the wording is a little awkward - the information about the players is thorough. Article itself was short but that could be a good thing.
I would have to say that you should really proofread your work before posting. As this is the first article that I have read of yours I will refrain from any more criticism until I am more familiar with your writing style. Thanks for sharing this information.
Thanks for this article. I'm really not into this thing but I've got to know about it somehow through your article. Keep writing! =)
It was a very short article. I think I might have enjoyed it more if I knew a little more about the subject.
Stan, good article concerning car racing. I do not follow the sport, but I am sure racing fans would appreciate this article. You could expand a bit on the history of the team and the expectations for the season.
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